Okay well I've uploaded the newest version of page 34, a heavy repaint of mostly the right side of the page. See I woke up in the morning after I'd first posted a page 34 and thought gee I need to fix up that chin, as I'd left it a little vague and protruding late the previous night.
which for me was a reasonable resolution of the lower facial anatomy—but something nagged at me about it, I think ultimately that it was just too static and wasn't projecting what I wanted it to. I took a desperate stab at making the mouth open more dramatically but of course that didn't work and led to having to blot it out and repaint the whole figure. ^ _^ And here we are! Broad and wild and messy but hey it's sort of doing something.
